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Letter
to Self: A Personal Time Capsule
Designed
by:
Lisa A. McClain, Hand Middle School
GRADE
LEVEL: 6th
SUBJECT(S):
Reading/Language Arts
1)
CORE CURRICULUM OBJECTIVE(S): Write various types of
compositions (letters).
(6-WA-4)
(PACT: IV.E)
RESTATEMENT:
Students will learn the parts of a friendly
letter and how to correctly write a letter by creating a
letter to themselves.
2)
OVERVIEW:
The
Letter to Self project allows students to both learn
about the process of writing a friendly letter and the
parts of a friendly letter.
It also allows students to reflect on their sixth
grade year. Once
the letters are completed, the teacher keeps them until
two years later when the students have completed eighth
grade. At
that point, a celebration is held and the letters are
returned to the students.
3)
FOCUS/ESSENTIAL QUESTION(S):
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What are the five parts of a friendly letter and where
are they located within the letter?
4)
TIME FRAME:
This
project is completed over a period of time.
Approximately 30-45 minutes will be needed to
pass out the assignment sheet, review the project
content, and discuss the project rubric.
Once students begin writing, I usually allow
approximately 20-30 minutes per day for 5-6 days for
students to work on their rough drafts and editing.
If it takes them longer than that to complete the
draft, it is assigned as homework.
The final draft is typed in the school's computer
lab and generally takes about four 50-minutes periods.
Arrangements need to be made for students
requiring additional time to type.
(Final copy can be handwritten if the lab is
unavailable or if there is insufficient time.)
5)
RESOURCES:
assignment sheet, rubric, computer lab
6)
ASSESSMENT: The
students will write a friendly letter to themselves,
which documents their current feelings, interests,
desires, and dreams.
Students will be assessed using the provided
rubric.
7)
INSTRUCTIONAL ACTIVITIES:
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Pass out the project assignment sheet.
Read over the project content answering any
student questions.
This should not be the first time students have
been exposed to the parts of a letter, so remind the
students of that prior instruction.
Review the parts of a letter as necessary.
Also let students know that the information about
the parts of a letter are something they will use
throughout their lives as they communicate via written
documents.
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Pass out the project rubric and discuss how the students
will be assessed.
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As you discuss the project, emphasize that this project
is only as valuable as the student makes it.
They need to be totally honest with themselves if
they wish to end up with a document that is meaningful
to them. Since
the emphasis on this project is on letter writing,
grading mechanics, spelling, etc. is not as important as
assessing their ability to write a letter accurately.
Students need to feel free to express their
innermost thoughts.
I have found it helpful to provide the students
with a way to indicate paragraphs that they do not want
me to read. That
way they do not have to worry about having me read
sensitive, personal, or embarrassing material.
(We usually agree on a symbol, such as a star, to
be placed at the beginning and end of the section that
they do not want me to read.)
I let them know that I have to be able to read at
least two paragraphs in each section of the letter so
that I can assess whether they are writing following the
conventions of the English language and adequately
fulfilling the requirements of each section.
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Using the mini-lesson model, provide students with the
five parts of a letter and how they are set up.
Since multiple days are used for drafting, a
different part of the letter can be presented each day.
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Time should be provided for students to work on their
prewriting and rough draft.
I generally give 20-30 minutes per day for 5-6
days. Since
the letter is divided into five sections, students
usually complete the prewriting in class, begin the
rough draft in class, and then complete the rough draft
for homework. They
are also to self-edit the rough draft for homework.
The next day, students pair up and peer edit
their drafts. (Because of the personal nature of this activity, I allow
students to self-select their editing partners.) The teacher is available during editing time to answer
questions and to provide feedback.
They then complete the prewriting for the next
section and begin the rough draft.
This process is followed until the entire letter
is complete. The
teacher will monitor and conference with students as
they work.
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Once rough drafts are complete and have been edited,
students go to the computer lab and type the final
copies of their letter.
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Once the letters have been assessed using the provided
rubric, both the letter and the rubric are returned to
the students. Each
student places his or her letter into a self-addressed
envelope and seals it.
The teacher then places all the letters into a
box labeled with the year the letters will be returned
(at the end of the students' eighth grade year).
The letters remain in that box in a visible
location until they are returned to the students.
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When letters are returned, I turn it into a celebration. The celebration is held as close to eighth grade graduation
as possible. Invitations
are sent to all the involved students, and they report
to my room during one of my planning periods.
I have refreshment, catch up with my former
students, make a little speech, and return the letters.
It is a delight to watch the faces and reactions
of the students as they revisit the person they used to
be!
LETTER
TO SELF
As a major English writing project, write a letter to
yourself. This
"Letter to Self" (LTS) has five
sections. You
can do the sections in any order, and the entire project
must be completed by _______________________.
You will have time in class to work on your
"Letter," and you are expected to complete
parts of it as homework.
View your LTS as a personal time capsule.
It is also a chance to learn the proper way of
writing a friendly letter.
The
purposes of doing the "Letter to Self"
are:
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To provide a record of who you are now
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To remember your current views, philosophy and outlooks
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To explore your feelings, attitudes, and opinions
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To create a document that, years from now, will have
significant value to you
The
five sections of the "Letter to Self" are:
ME,
NOW: my hopes, fears, dreams, intentions, goals,
problems, concerns, likes, dislikes, joys, frustrations,
what I like about myself, what I don't like about myself
what I'm proud of, what I think about, what bothers me,
who I am, etc.
MY
WORLD: a description of my home, bedroom, school,
neighborhood, town, favorite places to go, chores,
allowance, pet(s), possessions, clothes, religion,
current events that concern me, FAVORITES - books, music
groups, movies, TV, etc.
Include a map.
WHAT
I DO: my hobbies, pastimes, sports, school
activities, what I do when I'm alone, what I do with
friends, favorite snacks and foods, how I spend my
weekends and vacations, special activities I do,
organizations I belong to, etc.
PEOPLE
IN MY LIFE: my family, my siblings, my friends, my
teachers, the opposite sex, "him" or
"her," who I like, my best friend(s), people
I'd like to know better, people I admire and respect,
important people in my life, people who annoy me, etc.
MY
FUTURE: predictions, what I want to do, my long
range intentions, what I'm looking forward to, what I'm
dreading, my goals, my hopes and fears for the world,
the next school year, summer vacation, high school,
college, marriage, employment, etc.
In
doing this "Letter to Self," you are to write
about each sub-topic, but include the information that
is important to you. You should write at least _______ page(s) for each part.
You may also want to write about something
important that isn't mentioned above.
That is fine as long as you also address the five
required parts. This
"Letter to Self" is for you, and it should
deal with the things that are important and real in your
world - "the good, the bad, and the ugly."
The more honest you are with yourself, the more
you will appreciate and value your letter in years to
come.
Your
completed "Letter to Self" will be returned to
you in June of ________.
No one will read your LTS except you and those
you choose to share it with. Have fun! And
create something memorable!
LETTER
TO SELF RUBRIC
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5 |
3 |
1 |
0 |
Total |
| Prewriting |
Prewriting
completed for all letter sections. |
Prewriting
completed for 4 of 5 letter sections. |
Prewriting
completed for 3 of 5 letter sections. |
Prewriting
completed for less than 3 of 5 letter sections. |
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| Rough
Drafts |
Rough
draft completed for all letter sections. |
Rough
draft completed for 4 of 5 letter sections. |
Rough
draft completed for 3 of 5 letter sections. |
Rough
draft completed for less than 3 of 5 letter
sections. |
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| Editing |
Evidence
that both the author and a peer have edited all
sections. |
Evidence
that the author has edited all copies. |
Inadequate
editing.
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No
editing evident. |
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| LETTER
FORMAT |
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| Heading |
Letter
has a heading, which contains street address,
city, state, and ZIP code.
All are correctly punctuated and placed. |
Letter
has a heading, which is missing one required
element or has minor problems with punctuation
and placement. |
Letter
has a heading, which is missing more than one
element or has major problems with punctuation
and placement. |
Heading
not included. |
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| Greeting |
Letter
contains appropriate greeting, which is
correctly placed and punctuated. |
|
Letter
contains greeting, which is incorrectly placed
or punctuated. |
Greeting
not included. |
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| Body |
Letter
contains a body section, which is correctly
indented. |
|
Letter
contains a body section, which is incorrectly
indented. |
Body
not included. |
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| Closing |
Letter
contains a closing, which is correctly
punctuated and placed. |
|
Closing
has problems with punctuation and placement. |
Closing
not included. |
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| Signature |
Letter
contains a signature, which is correctly placed. |
|
Signature
incorrectly placed. |
Signature
not included. |
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| FINAL
COPY |
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| Complete |
Letter
addresses all five sections. |
Letter
addresses four sections. |
Letter
addresses three sections. |
Letter
addresses less than three sections. |
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| Length |
All
sections meet length requirements. |
Four
sections meet length requirements. |
Three
sections meet length requirements. |
Less
than three sections meet length requirements. |
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| Addresses
Topics |
Student
responses show reflection upon the provided
topic and are detailed and complete. |
Student
responses show minimal reflection upon the
provided topic and are somewhat detailed and
complete. |
Student
responses fail to show
reflection upon the provided topic and
are not detailed and/or complete. |
Student
responses show little effort or reflection and
are not detailed or complete. |
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| Sentence
Structure |
Student's
writing contains a variety of appropriate and
correct sentences. |
Student's
writing contains appropriate and correct
sentences. |
Student's
writing exhibits difficulty in writing accurate
sentences. |
Problems
in sentence structure are so significant as to
make reading difficult. |
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| Mechanics |
Student
follows the conventions of the English language. |
Student
exhibits minor errors with regards to
conventions of the English language. |
Student
exhibits major errors with regards to
conventions of the English language. |
Errors
with the conventions of the English language are
so significant as to make reading difficult. |
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| TOTAL |
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Comments:___________________________________________________
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