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Egyptian Diary Project

Designed by: Lisa A. McClain, Hand Middle School  

GRADE LEVEL: 6th         SUBJECT(S):  Reading/Language Arts

1) CORE CURRICULUM OBJECTIVE(S):  Write various types of compositions (journals).  (6-WA-4) (PACT:  IV.E)

Build a word bank of vocabulary across the content areas necessary for the interpretation of literature, text or passage. (6-VW-1)

Use brainstorming, questioning, journals, note taking, free writing, cubing, and reading to generate and explore ideas. (6-WP-2) (PACT:  IV.B.6; IV.C.4)

RESTATEMENT:  Students will write a journal based upon the life of an ancient Egyptian pharaoh they create.  They are to use appropriate notetaking strategies and include vocabulary from history class that is specific to the study of Ancient Egypt.

2) OVERVIEW:    This lesson serves as a link between the study of Ancient Egypt in 6th grade world history and language arts.  Assigned in language arts, this activity allows students to use information gleaned in  social studies to complete a language arts assignment.  Students will create the life of an ancient Egyptian and document that life through a diary project.  The student will deal with such issues as the pyramids, art and architecture, religion, government, and social experiences.

3) FOCUS/ESSENTIAL QUESTION(S):

* Can you write a diary for an ancient Egyptian?

* What are the different ways you can organize your information prior to writing?

* What are some of the vocabulary words you have discussed in history that will help you complete this project?

4) TIME FRAME: Three to four 50 minute periods, plus homework time.

5) RESOURCES:  assignment sheet, rubric, notes from world history class, chalkboard or overhead, markers, colored pencils, students' world history books and their notes, computers with internet access, web sites:

www.bible-history.com/resource/ff_hiero.htm (about hieroglyphics)

www.cmi.k12.il.us/~kempeja/Anewegypt.html

www.lib.utulsa.edu/guides/egyptne2.htm

http://users.massed.net/~mdurant/AncietEgyptWebquest.htm

6) ASSESSMENT:  Students will create a diary of the life of an ancient Egyptian pharaoh and will be assessed using the provided rubric.

7) INSTRUCTIONAL ACTIVITIES:

* Prior to beginning this activity, the language arts teacher will need to meet with the world history teacher in order to co-ordinate the requirements of the project with the content begin taught in history.  This can be as formal as planning together or as informal as the language arts borrowing a copy of the world history book and curriculum guide.  It is also appropriate that this assignment count as a grade in both history and language arts.  The rubric could either stand as it is, or it could be modified so that the language arts teacher grades with the written components, and the history teacher grades the historical information.

* Discuss with students that the assignment they are beginning is based upon what they have been learning in world history.   (Note: Prior to this class period, tell students that they need to bring their history books and their notes on Ancient Egypt to class the next day.  They will need these to work on the project.)

* Pass out the assignment sheet and rubric.  Discuss the project requirements.  Let the students know at this time if the project will count as a grade in history also.

* Pair students to begin their research and review their notes together.  This can be done by counting 1-2, the students can decide or the teacher can assign partners.  Students should begin by looking through their notes to determine what information they already have. 

* Next, students can use the internet and the sites to locate additional information.  Students should be organizing their notes based on each diary entry.  For example, a section on pyramids, a section on school, etc.

* Once students have gathered information, they begin writing their diaries.  Remind them to decorate and include pictures for each entry.  Provide time in class for some writing of the rough drafts of the diary entries. 

* Students will return to work with their partners to do a peer edit.  After editing the rough drafts, the remainder of the project will be completed at home. 

* On the day the project is due, each student will select his or her favorite entry and share it with the class.  You can expand this presentation so that the students dress in appropriate dress and become the pharaoh they wrote about. 

* The finished projects should be displayed in a prominent location within the school.  They could also be lent to other history classes, or other history classes could be invited to the presentations.

 

EGYPTIAN DIARY PROJECT RUBRIC

 

  5 4 3 2 0 Score
Complete Sentences Book is written in complete sentences, which vary in complexity and structure. Book is written in complete sentences. One fragment or run-on. Two fragments or run-ons. Three or more fragments 
or run-ons.
 
Grammar/
Mechanics
Sentences are written using proper grammar and mechanics. Sentences contain minor grammatical or mechanical errors, which do not detract from the overall impression of the diary. Sentences contain grammatical OR mechanical errors, which interfere with the reading of the diary. Sentences contain severe grammatical AND mechanical errors, which interfere with the reading of the diary. Grammatical and mechanical errors are so significant as to making understanding content very difficult.  
Vocabulary Student included 10 or more history vocabulary words. Student used 7-9 history vocabulary words. Student used 5-6 history vocabulary words. Student used 3-4 history vocabulary words. Student used less than 3 history vocabulary words.  
Writing Process Work reflects use of a process approach to writing.  Prewriting, peer editing, and revision are evident. Work reflects use of a process approach and some prewriting, editing, and revision have occurred. Work does not reflect adequate prewriting, peer editing, or revision have occurred. Minimal evidence of a process approach to writing.  Work has not been edited or revised.   No prewriting, editing, or revisions.  No evidence that a process approach to writing was used.  
Notetaking Student used appropriate notetaking strategies while researching and notes are kept well organized.   Student took notes during research, but either used an inappropriate strategies or failed to keep them organized.   Student did not turn in any notes based on their research.  
Complete Student completed all diary entries. One entry incomplete. Two entries incomplete. Three entries incomplete. More than three entries incomplete.  
Length Length of entries is appropriate to cover content in all entries.   Entries consistently too short to adequately address content.   Majority of entries fail to meet length requirements and do not adequately address content.  
Accuracy Information is accurate. Information contains minor errors.   Information contains significant errors. Information contains numerous significant errors.  
Illustrations and Color Student used color and illustrations in such a way that it enhances the project. Student used color and illustrations. Student used color and pictures, but not effectively. Student used color or pictures, but not both. Student used neither color nor pictures.  
Neatness Work is very neat, easy to read, and suitable for display. Work is generally neat, easy to read, and is suitable for display. Work is lacking in neatness or readability but is still suitable for display. Work is mess, difficult to read, and is not suitable for display. Work is too messy to be ready or displayed.  
  TOTAL  

 

Ancient Egypt Diary Project

 
We have complete several tasks in World History. First, you created a pyramid and decorated it. Next, you worked with a group to design a mummy. You have also completed a coloring page related to Ancient Egypt. These items, along with your imagination and some research in the Media Center, will allow you to become Pharaoh. You will create a diary based upon the life you imagine. Listed below you will find the specific entries which must be included and how you are to complete them. Most importantly: HAVE FUN and BE CREATIVE!
 
Diary Entry 1: In this entry you need to introduce the reader to the Pharaoh (you) and his or her family. Note: In one of the entries you will have to discuss one of your children, so make sure you identify at least one child in this entry. All the people must have names, and the relationships between everyone must be clear.

Diary Entry 2: This entry should discuss the flooding of the Nile River and how this flooding affects the Pharaoh (you) and his or her family.  Describe the efforts made to hold back the floodwaters.  Discuss damage to people’s property, and land.  You want to describe ways in which the flooding will help you and your people through the next year. Diary Entry 3:  Describe a conversation with one of your sons or daughters.  He or she is telling you about a problem they had at school.  Include details about the schooling of the Ancient Egyptian and how they wrote.
Diary Entry 4: You have just been given a new piece of artwork by one of the artisans near by.  Describe what type of art you have received (painting, weaving, rug, tapestry, or sculpture), why you were given the gift, where you will place it in your palace, and what your reaction is to the artwork.  (Do you like it?  Why or why not?)  Remember, you are looking through the eyes of an Ancient Egyptian Pharaoh, not the eyes of a teenager of today. Diary Entry 5: One of your slaves is causing you a great deal of trouble.  Describe what the problem is, and how you will resolve the situation. Diary Entry 6: The end of the Ancient Egyptian year has arrived, and the holy days of celebration have begun.  A great party is to be held at your palace.  Describe what foods will be served, what the decorations will look like, who will attend, and what they people will wear.
Diary Entry 7: Describe the progress being made on your pyramid and tell what the finished pyramid will be like.   Diary Entry 8: Select a topic about Ancient Egypt which you find interesting, and write a detailed diary entry. Diary Entry 9:  Tell about a typical day in the life of Pharaoh (you).  Give specifics about how you spend your day and the types of duties which you must carry out.  
Diary Entry 10: Describe your palace in detail.

Make sure: 

*You include a title page

*Your project is in diary form.

*You use first person.

*Drawings/pictures are included.

*You are creative and have fun!

*Each entry is between ¾ of a page and one page if typed, and 1 ½ pages to 2 pages if handwritten.

 

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